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Title: The Dark Fountain | Submit a Review
dark777888: i read that other story about cate and it makes sense now 2007-04-25 18:16:32
dark777888: firstly i would like to say good start to a good story. a little sketchy but with some touch up it will be good. i would talk a little bit more about who returned. was ron there? Hermione? just explain a little more. and in the part about cate you said she say her stepfathers body. just explain a little more because that left me confused. especially when you said she was going to see lupin. (i havent read the 6th book for 6 months so if i missed something in there let me know). also if you want me to edit it for you just email it to me and i will email back an edited copy. just private message me or check my account and ill give you an address. the one on my account page works. and dont send it as an attackment. just put it in the text. anyhow update and keep working on it. 2007-04-21 00:49:22
CassandraSerenity: Hello. I just wanted to drop you a line and make sure you realize that all chapters posted on GP are supposed to be over 1,000 words long. I know it may sound rigid, but we ask it to make sure that people can really get into your story. I won't be asking Harry to remove this story yet, but please be aware of this as you write your next chapters. 2007-04-18 14:28:35
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