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Title: Isobel Salt | Submit a Review

harry2006: The story has much potential. It has been nicely written and there not much grammatical mistakes. That's the good part. But while posting you should put extra spaces between paragraphs so that the story does not look like an essay. There is much room for improvement. For example, the first chapter was very fast paced. Try to slow the story down. When you create a scenario, concentrate on it and make it big. Describe the surroundings and try to make the story more interesting. This story is very good, but you have much to learn. Good work and good luck! I will be waiting to read more. :D And if you want to discuss anything, just pm me. 2007-12-03 13:17:35


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