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Title: Harry Potter and the New Order | Submit a Review
YPotter: It is good but needs way more chapters also I think harry should trust Dumbledore more as the story moves on. 2010-04-08 20:50:48
eseth2k: Genuinely Genious.... small spell mistakes.. but can be overlooked...keep on writing...keep up the good work and Finish it :) 2009-10-29 14:47:22
xtremerockaddict: Definately Love it!
There's a buzz you get from the rebellion.
The only thing I could criticize, is the fact that, Harry and the New Order, seem to get things done, rather quickly and without a problem, there isn't much to hang on to. I think if you made it a little harder it'd be more fun and exciting to read. Suspence keeps the reader going as long as it isn't overdone.
On a whole the story is awesome though! 2008-12-30 22:50:31
phoenix_dancer: This was amazing! You've managed to capture JK's style of writing which is truly awesome! I really enjoyed this chapter, my favorite part being how Harry described the room full of Bludgers. I actually laughed out loud on that one. Good work! 2008-08-02 22:27:07
peregrin: The happy ending of course :-)
(that theory was just a joke...) 2008-03-17 11:59:57
UTforever22: Hey, guys, i need help deciding between two different endings for this story. drop me a pm if you are interested in helping and i'll tell you m choices. 2008-03-15 21:49:46
hp12: really good keep goin
2008-03-14 21:36:11
peregrin: Arrgh! Cliffhanger!!
But I'll have a revenge - I'll write a theory! Muhahahaha!
OK, Snape and Draco kidnapped Ginny. Harry will them, torture them to learn her whereabouts and finally kill them both. Then he will track Ginny but he will arrive only to see her killed by Death Eaters. This will anger him enough to turn tu Dark side and he will kill them all (and he will change his name to Darth *somethink*).
In the end, he will defeat Voldy but he will become a new lark lord (and Dumbladore will say to him: "A Dark Side I sense from you.").
Ha! Now you have it! :P 2008-03-12 09:47:57
pyromain: Well I'm new to this site and this is my first review. I like the site because of this story (the layout did help) I really liked the story though. I liked that harry isn't taking any BS any more and doing his own thing I like the brave Ginny facing her worst fear and then changing it to a place to relax. I hope to see the update soon so I can enjoy the updates. Thanks for the story so far. 2008-01-29 12:10:06
Steven: Very very well written. Closer attention to proofreading would have earned a perfect score. Excellent story which I am enjoying immensely. Well done! 2007-12-18 05:05:52
lillylove: Chapter 7-OHH the smell of adventure in the air!! keep them coming it getting soooo good. 2007-11-27 22:26:23
lillylove: Good story, keep it up 2007-11-13 22:24:10
MagicLover: I like your story!! Keep up the good work! 2007-11-07 11:34:59
FlameHairedBonnie: Cool! Please keep updating. 2007-11-03 21:54:36
lillylove: Liking the take charge Harry. Can't wait until you write more 2007-11-02 09:05:36
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