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Ginny Potter - A Harry Potter Fanfiction Archive and Community -- Fictioneer | |
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Title: Harry Potter and the race for existence | Submit a Review
thestagpatronus: it's a good story, but at some parts it seems too formal. Like when the twins say "father." Usually 'father' is associated with a unloving or broken connection between children and their father. It sounds more like the twins say 'dad.' Same with Ron. Anyway, I liked the story-line, but if you got rid of the formality, it would be better! 2008-05-11 02:38:42
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