|
|
Home |
|
|
Discussions |
| |
|
|
Member Submissions |
| |
|
|
News |
| |
|
|
Information |
| |
|
|
Content |
| |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
There isn't a Biggest Story for Today, yet. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Ginny Potter - A Harry Potter Fanfiction Archive and Community -- Fictioneer | |
|
|
|
|
|
Title: Maneater | Submit a Review
joe_jonas: i'm sorry but for saying that you wished you owned harry i'm now allowed to call you a freak! hee hee! anyway good story although i'm glad that in the real harry potter nobody said that about ginny because it's horrible and untrue. oh well. at least she ends up with harry! tootles!!! 2008-06-14 22:47:49
im_very_shweepy: plaaaaaaaaaaaaay the best saaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwng in the wurlddddd
or ill eat ur sowls!!
omg well done bbe!!!
wicked lol
couldn't stop shaking (laffing) through the lurve dungeon (gandalfs), and stuff
loads of lurve
clivey dahhling
couldn't stop laffing today!! ( 25/01)walking home
hehehehehehehehe
good one 2008-01-25 11:42:50
Ginger_Bizkit: Thanks I could really use the advice! I dont normally write songfics, infact I hate them with a passion, but this was a story that randomly popped into my head!
Thanks for the review
Ginger_Bizkit 2008-01-22 15:52:49
steven: Let me encourage you in your development as a writer. You have good potential, but your story could be tightened up. The use of song lyrics doesn't usually work, at least for me, though it might for other people. A song will pad out a story without moving the action along at all. You may notice J K Rowling sometimes used poetry that was germane to the story and provided a hook to hang dialogue on, but didn't use song as far as I remember. Try to avoid song as it is to be listened to, but poetry is read, and therefore works better for a story.
Well done though, interesting story that engaged me. 2007-12-27 19:25:57
|
|
|
|
|
Version for phpnuke by Rob Wolf Dev v0.2 |