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Title: A Little Help Ch.1 | Submit a Review
Ginnyskank: Omg omg. Coolness! But, ok ok...here's your promised review...I think this was a little confusing...I mean I had to reread some lines twice but still not fully comprehend it. lol. What really confuses me is what Malfoy is gonna do and what this plan is. Quite fankly, I'm seriously lost. I'm sorry, but that's the truth. It sounds like a great idea, but you could've written it much much better. Ok? And by the way, that little "Larry Loughter" made me laugh out loud! I mean I was like "Omg! How pathetic!" Haha. =) I like how you explained how both Ron and Hermione felt about each other 'cause both are completely understandable. And I especially loved the last line. "Not a chance" lolololol. It was good, of course, but still I think it needs a lot of work, but I wouldn't say this to you if I didn't know that you could do it. I know you can do it! I'm with you all the way! Lmao! So, awesome story and I can't wait for chappie 2! How's it coming? I'm very curious to see where you take this story! Okey dokey?! Gotta go! l8erzzzz! If you have any Q's about the review, just PM me! xoxo <3 ~Nat/Ginnyskank~ Ps* I gave it a...6/10. =) Really great job! A lot of potential! 2007-03-04 19:09:37
issela: I rike it!!!!! Can't wait to see how this works out, dun dun duuunnn.... 2006-08-20 15:43:43
Anonymous: good story...u should write another chapter!!!!!!!!:):) 2006-07-14 22:14:16
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