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Title: I'm Harry Potter, Savy | Submit a Review
newkidontheblock: no, in book six it went to Harry =D 2008-05-18 20:47:02
newkidontheblock: no, in book six it went to Harry =D 2008-05-18 20:46:52
newkidontheblock: no, in book six it went to Harry =D 2008-05-18 20:46:52
Anonymous: You forgot that Grimmauld Place was inherited by Bellatrix because it goes to the next Black pureblood! Really interesting, though! 2007-07-09 23:36:00
Anonymous: You forgot that Grimmauld Place was inherited by Bellatrix because it goes to the next Black pureblood! Really interesting, though! 2007-07-09 23:35:45
Anonymous:
Love it! i started reading a couldn't stop! i got dissapointed when i got to the last chapter so, please, update soon!!
2007-05-30 16:38:42
Kimi: add more chapters to this cuz it is really good and i like it so pleaseee add more chapters to it 2007-05-17 22:48:21
hermioneslilsis: I luvved it like always, but a little odd last chapter...I mean I know they thought that kid was a Death Eater, but they did the same thing to him that they're trying to stop Voldie/Death Eaters from doing. Still luvved it though:D 2007-05-16 20:08:40
Anonymous: i love you 2007-05-08 20:02:35
Anonymous: truly a masterpiece, keep it up. 2007-05-06 20:07:37
Anonymous: I would just like to say what a talented writer you truly are. This is a magnificent portraying of our favorite wizard. Kudos. 2007-05-06 20:06:53
Kimi: add more chapters to this cuz it is really good 2007-05-02 17:04:54
hermioneslilsis: No no no!! I demand to know what happens!!! You can't torture an innocent girl like this, it should be illegal. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is I luvv it and want another chapter to be up♥ 2007-05-02 16:17:58
Kimi: add more chapters 2007-04-20 23:11:41
Anonymous: Hi
Not bad :) keep it going, and it will be a really good one. 2007-04-16 17:20:05
Kimi: add more chapters to this cuz it is a pleasure to read 2007-03-26 17:40:11
Kimi: add more chapters to this please 2007-02-27 20:54:36
MuggleMomma: LOL! I love the timebombs that the trio set for the Dursleys! Quite well-deserved, I think. A couple of things that I think might make your story even better - first of all, please space your paragraphs with double-returns so it's easier to read. What you've done is called "block formatting" and is notoriously hard on the eyes! Also, I think your story would be even better with a little extra plot development. For example, I really like the fact that Harry is going to go back to school, but he came to the decision rather quickly, especially considering that he was all set not to go back. Also, I was a little concerned that Ron and Hermione had decided to go back without even consulting Harry...it seems a little OOC considering that they had already given their words that they would stick with him.
You've got a great start here, newkid. Spend some time on really fleshing out your plot, space out those paragraphs and maybe look into getting a beta reader before you post...and you'll go from being a good writer to a great one! :) Good luck! 2006-09-11 23:15:41
asha: its really good
i think this chapters long enough
its really good 4 ur first hp story
asha 2006-09-01 08:28:16
hpfan518: good start but rather short 2006-08-24 19:29:05
Anonymous: Review by Jose Arbelada
Nice first chapter, but compressing the time it takes to travel on the knight bus does n ot add to the story. Try to keep things reealistic.
JMA 2006-08-24 14:31:56
Anonymous: Its a bit short isn't it? 2006-08-24 05:58:37
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