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Ginny Potter - A Harry Potter Fanfiction Archive and Community -- Fictioneer | |
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Title: Because You Live | Submit a Review
joe_jonas: that makes me want to cry it's so sweet. now why can't there be more guys in the world that are like that? that was an awsome story!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2008-06-11 12:35:14
RupertsPheonix: First off, I love that song and I loooove Jesse! lol. =) Okay, to the story... First I'll do my constructive critique: 1.] Thoughts and song lyrics need to be in italics. I think that I'd put the song lyrics he says in italics, too. (If you're not sure how to do italics, check out the thread I posted in the Beta/Help section of the forums or PM me.) 2.] You did a decent job characterizing Ginny, but I do wish you'd describe her a bit more. Maybe just describe how Harry sees her or something... I think it'd add a lot. Alright, so overall, this was quite good! Nice job! =) --RP 2007-01-01 09:59:35
hplover: That was good! Please write somemore chapters!!! 2006-12-31 17:34:15
ginnys_twin: One comment Hermiones_twin used this song... earlier. Um I am her sister and she says it is no prblem as long as you don't follow her story line. 2006-12-31 16:40:59
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