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Steven: This story has great ideas. It also has a lot of potential. You only score 2 with me because it is obvious that no attention has been paid to proof reading, especially spelling, and punctuation. This story could be so much more. It has a great concept. It introduces new characters, but doesn't engage because it is too disjointed. When you're thinking about dramatic timing in writing, read it aloud! Reading aloud gives you the length of time that a scene runs for, and then you can judge how much more description, action, interaction, and plot development needs to be there. If you are building to a dramatic conclusion, you have to put all the prior steps in to the plot. I am so disappointed in this story - which could have been one of the finest pieces I have read - only because you let yourself down so badly in proof reading your text. I would like to encourage you to continue to write. What is wrong is correctable. What is right shows great promise. At this stage in your writing: Proof read, proof read, proof read! 2007-12-31 09:00:23

Kimi: add more chapters to this cuz it is reall good 2007-04-20 22:19:22

Kimi: add more chapters to this cuz it is really good and i liked it 2007-04-04 17:39:01

harrypotterfreak: I dont think they should go back to be babies that idea sucks. Sorry for being rude 2007-03-29 16:37:12

harrypotterfreak: Its great but im confused next time explain why they are there 2007-03-29 16:11:34

Anonymous: AWESOME!!!!!!!! 2007-03-24 20:53:42

Anonymous: You've got a great story line going on, but the beggining was really rocky. You kept jumping around like crzy!!! Other than that it was great keep rightin and update soon!!! 2007-03-05 20:42:06

Anonymous: okay now i am addicted. plz keep writing. im begging you!!! i loved it. the beginning was a bit confusing but then i understood it. plz continue.pm when you up dated a chapter plz? my little screenname thingy is SSoccer665. my computer is not letting me sign in. 2007-03-05 08:29:13

Anonymous: You need a Beta to check your work. Otherwise it has potential 2007-02-18 06:25:16

angel_in_training: Okay....This is a good story. Great idea, but a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes. I love the story. Please update soon! @;~Aly~;@ 2007-02-13 13:16:48

ginnypotter7: revew revew revew revew revew! pleze? 2007-02-12 21:02:34

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